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Talat
Abbasi's voice provides a fresh perspective in this collection
of short stories. It doesn't reflect the usual milieu that
one has come to expect from contemporary Pakistani writing,
especially that pertaining to the diaspora. The voice that
resonates in these stories is not that of yet another 'upper
class' or 'upwardly mobile' Karachite, who has had the privilege
to attend school in England or North America. On the contrary,
the voice that comes plaintively through these stories is
that of hitherto unforgotten - those from the lower class,
poor relatives of rich society-wallahs or even servants.
The style of writing is also markedly different from the
likes of younger authors, such as say Kamila Shamsie or
Mohsin Hamid - two of Pakistani newer shining stars in the
field of literature.
The style of writing is 'old school' in a certain sense.
There is no attempt to be witty with word play or to explore
forms of narrative. The narrative is as direct as the stories
that are told through it. No frills attached. And it works
well for Abbasi.
The characters in these stories are ones you might see as
you cross a street in Karachi, or hear as they recount their
story while sitting next to you in a bus. The poor relative
dousing herself with rose attar before performing her monthly
ritual of taking bitter gourds and other foodstuff to the
rich relative, fully knowing it will be distributed to the
servants of the house. Or the rich relative, lying on the
sofa of her cozy living room, with a face pack and two slices
of cucumber on her eyes, scarcely moving on the arrival
of the poor relative.
Or the mother whose body is tired from birthing daughters
again and again, but she still yearns for a son. Her simple
questions don't allow for a girl who can make her parents
proud. Rather they ask whether studies will arrange her
daughter's dowry or ensure that she at least has a son.
Meanwhile the daughter, a clever lass who wants to go to
school, with tears in her eyes, mutely agrees to sit at
home and help with the housework the mother can no longer
perform.
And the submissive wife in New York, who ventures out in
pouring rain, with her salwar kameez hitched up, to collect
some cardboard boxes for her errant husband.
These people shine through - their weaknesses, follies,
and often times their hypocrisies
With her straightforward description, Abbasi conjures up
a world of people so familiar to us. And those whose voices
we often tend to ignore. Like the absent servant in "Going
to Baltistan." The narrator is the rich 'memsahib' of the
house, who likes to think herself an egalitarian, humane
and charitable woman. Her platitudes for various causes
she claims to organize disappear in the instant she admonishes
the invisible servant to shut the door quickly lest the
hot air outside come into the air-conditioned room.
The simple stories are easily accessible to any reader,
and a welcome alternative in contemporary Pakistani literature.
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